Our first draft:
Feedback
- remove all unimportant scenes that reduce the quality e.g. stairs, hiding by the door
- remove unnecessary lengthy sequences e.g. coming back in after shutting door, unnecessarily long party scenes.
- sort out the sound so it is in time with the cuts
- switch around some parts of the sequence to make it more effective
- re-film the things below
To-Do
- film close ups of eyes looking scared, bruised
- pitch black, heavy breathing, lighting match, masked face appearing behind
- running through door, slamming it shut
- quick flashes of dead victims - only a second, could use photographs
- take pictures for the poster
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